Sunday, May 22, 2005

Signs Of Life And New..... Comments

Rating: 3.8

the ocean split open, like a
zipper being pulled down.
the sun hit the bottom of
this wonder, with hope of
...
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DAVID GERARDINO
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SO MUCH IMAGERY IN AFEW SHORT & WELL CPOPT LINES TAKES TALENT TO AMASS SUCH A WORK...NICE PENNING, DAVID! FRANK

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Duncan Wyllie 21 January 2006

It may well be a little out there David.I'm glad it is, otherwise I couldn't have seen it! Brilliant again David Thankyou

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P.O.P. Erwin Baxter 22 May 2005

Word up Gerardino, baxter senses music. But edit the poem to correct the spelling of beginning. all the best erwin

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David Gerardino 22 May 2005

ok, its a little out there, still i couldnt resist..............

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