over all its a potentialy great poem. the rhyme scheme strays after verse 5 line 2. If you wana keep to the rhym scheme you should tighten it up from there.
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over all its a potentialy great poem. the rhyme scheme strays after verse 5 line 2. If you wana keep to the rhym scheme you should tighten it up from there.