Friday, June 8, 2007

Signed With A Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.5

I like you,
But I would never tell.
I like you,
Do you like me as well?
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Keiromi Nozomu
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Yao Tzu 08 June 2007

over all its a potentialy great poem. the rhyme scheme strays after verse 5 line 2. If you wana keep to the rhym scheme you should tighten it up from there.

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