Signals Comments

Wow excellent I seldom it's very much better than my poem.The scenery you penned down is more lively. The lines Ting -tongs Red signal Making them to stand Stop them from crossing To the other side Patience is wearing When there is long waits... I love the lines and the poem too.😍👍

" Traffic of thoughts" ? Wow! ! Great concept to view it from that angle. Great job

Beautiful poem madam. So beautiful.100++++++++++++

It's our conscience that controls the traffic of our thoughts, otherwise intincts excite and encorage to break the signals of the traffic of thoughts. An unique poem by Bharati Nayak, loved it.

Clearing the roads As they gladly move ahead l love your poem and writing 10++++++++

As they gladly move ahead cheery thoughts Rush forward Singing and ringing I move ahead with the lines Singing and ringing Nicely crafted poem mam.I enjoy. Regards Binaya

beautiful poem brought smile singing and ringing

Terrific use of traffic symbols. A totally fresh way of viewing our creative problems! Looks like another one for my favourite poems' list! Yes and a certain 10, Bharati tom

Red signal symbolizing that a person is in a Green Room to wait and not to loose patience thereby yellow signal reflecting the hope of life to move ahead in near future and at the end the Green signal filling the hearts with joy in embracing the freedom!

Signals we find all through the roads we tread, stopping us, directing us whither and thither! Ultimately, where we reach is our own destiny. Signals take no blame or claim. Great poetry.

very beautiful lines mam.....

Ready to go along with the works of peace and love. Nice work.

Traffic of thoughts what an idea! and yes it really happens. wonderful piece.

great concept. loved the way u inked the thoughts.

Well expressed thoughts

the thoughts waiting at the traffic signal...well done..