Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Signals Comments

Rating: 4.8

Traffic of thoughts
Line up
Jam around
Blocked at the crossings
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Bharati Nayak
COMMENTS
Archita Kumar 16 May 2019

Wow excellent I seldom it's very much better than my poem.The scenery you penned down is more lively. The lines Ting -tongs Red signal Making them to stand Stop them from crossing To the other side Patience is wearing When there is long waits... I love the lines and the poem too.😍👍

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Fantone Mdala 08 May 2019

" Traffic of thoughts" ? Wow! ! Great concept to view it from that angle. Great job

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 May 2019

Beautiful poem madam. So beautiful.100++++++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

It's our conscience that controls the traffic of our thoughts, otherwise intincts excite and encorage to break the signals of the traffic of thoughts. An unique poem by Bharati Nayak, loved it.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 December 2017

Clearing the roads As they gladly move ahead l love your poem and writing 10++++++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 October 2017

As they gladly move ahead cheery thoughts Rush forward Singing and ringing I move ahead with the lines Singing and ringing Nicely crafted poem mam.I enjoy. Regards Binaya

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Muhammad Ali 01 February 2017

beautiful poem brought smile singing and ringing

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Bharati Nayak 01 February 2017

Thank you Muhammad Ali for reading and giving your valuable opinions on my poems.

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Tom Billsborough 13 August 2016

Terrific use of traffic symbols. A totally fresh way of viewing our creative problems! Looks like another one for my favourite poems' list! Yes and a certain 10, Bharati tom

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Queeny Gona 10 June 2016

Red signal symbolizing that a person is in a Green Room to wait and not to loose patience thereby yellow signal reflecting the hope of life to move ahead in near future and at the end the Green signal filling the hearts with joy in embracing the freedom!

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Bharati Nayak 10 June 2016

Thank you Queeny for your nice comments.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 April 2016

Signals we find all through the roads we tread, stopping us, directing us whither and thither! Ultimately, where we reach is our own destiny. Signals take no blame or claim. Great poetry.

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Sonali Ganguly 31 March 2016

very beautiful lines mam.....

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2015

Ready to go along with the works of peace and love. Nice work.

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Sanjukta Nag 21 September 2015

Traffic of thoughts what an idea! and yes it really happens. wonderful piece.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 September 2015

great concept. loved the way u inked the thoughts.

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2015

Well expressed thoughts

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2015

the thoughts waiting at the traffic signal...well done..

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