Thursday, March 15, 2018

Signals. Comments

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I am at the corner
waiting for the light to change,
waiting for you,
I am waiting for you.
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Carl Roussell
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John Beaton 23 August 2019

Excellent metaphor for an on-off relationship. I particularly like the middle couplet.

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Carl Roussell 24 August 2019

Thanks for commenting, and I am happy you like the poem.

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Aqua Flower 22 February 2019

Sometimes we change but the world around us does not. We see the light and a different path that leads us to a life that's different perhaps lonely, yet peaceful. We give up one thing to have another yet we still yearn for the company however chaotic or dysfunctional it was. An interesting write.

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Carl Roussell 22 February 2019

Your comment is so accurate. How often would a visual emotional traffic signal have made life decisions easier to make? Thanks for the read and comment. And may you cross your streets safely!

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Carl Roussell

Trenton, Ontario
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