Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Sight Seeing Comments

Rating: 2.5

I walked into the waiting room and clicked up fifty four
and what came in behind me nearly knocked me to the floor.
A family of three who were the size of a house, and as I looked
up I felt as meek as a mouse.As I took my ticket to have my blood
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Duncan Wyllie 21 May 2006

You know how to see the funny side, this flows very well, I enjoyed it! Big smiles Love Duncan

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Ernestine Northover 18 May 2006

I love these happenings, they make life so interesting. Nice story, and I can believe it, I've been there. Couple of spelling things which might help. 'Their behinds', and 'their minds', as you are speaking of more than one person. Just an observation. A great write about everyday occurances. Love Ernestine XXX

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***** ********* 17 May 2006

Well it is a bit fattist Sylvia, but rhymes well and full of observations on lifes wonders! lol Smiling, Tai

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