Wednesday, July 25, 2007

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I've tried to build my life on what is right,
to distinguish what is false from what is true,
I always knew it would not happen overnight,
I've not seen clearly since I fell in love with you.
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Barry Van Allen
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Brian Jani 06 May 2014

nice poem it rhymes too

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Chuck Audette 13 August 2007

lovely rhyming. Nice punning title, a bright spot in a sad piece. -chuck

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Dee Daffodil 08 August 2007

Great piece...and catchy title! ! Hugs, Dee

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