Saturday, July 23, 2016

Sighing Ghosts And Orphaned Dreams Comments

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The house should fall under the weight of despair
Abandoned tunnels for halls, accoustic marvels all
When clouds gather within these jagged spires
Thunder and eternity rumble through the valleys
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Nosheen Irfan 25 August 2016

It's wonderful how you have depicted illusion n regret through the image of an old abandoned house. This goes in my favorite poems list. I love the dark n dismal imagery. A significant write that says nothing lasts forever n happiness n life are merely illusions.10

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