Monday, August 26, 2013

Sigh Comments

Rating: 4.5

She did not smile when I walked down the aisle
I sensed as if she was on a trial
How will she know I am truly nice
What’s instilled in her mind is otherwise
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Marvin Brato 24 January 2014

Short yet though provoking poem...who is she?

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 September 2013

Sigh... make my heart sighs too....this is mind-working your words make my heart sighs... The title itself projects its complete thought and the title alone Sigh, is poetry thank you. happy to read this touching, a little bit abstract..as if a sonnet needs to be analyze whats the conclusion and the meaning behind...wholesome...mysterious..strong yet with a hidden fragility within Im waiting for the next stanza.....*smile*

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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2013

Like many others, I too am curious to know who she is. Is she your mother in law or his ex? An attractive title for the nice, short poem. A sigh well released, now cheer up!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 29 August 2013

very good poem, with descriptive elegance. Well done!

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Marcus Mckinley 28 August 2013

is this a wedding? are you takinjg about your new mother in-law? if you are she may never see you for who you truly are.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 August 2013

it is only on faith. faith or trust is most powerful, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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