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great in it's consice, image filled communication of a deep message I agree with your previous commentor in that your poem relates a good/important message. I find myself comparing it to another poem i read earlier today on the same topic with completely different imagery. Both of your poems have in common the advice to overcome fear in order to reach the entirely possible opportunities ahead (which i agree with and always love to hear about since i think we are all constantly trying to move past fear) . You have not read the other poem, but i will say that your images are much more appropriate and so well described and expanded upon. sorry for such a ranting comment, lovely work ~Katharine

there is a good message in this..lovely poem