Thursday, June 6, 2013

Siege Of Heart, Love Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I rise in grace with eyes unblinking
far above the blind directionless clouds
with the thoughtful thoughts of love rethinking
the sinful earth encased within your shroud.
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Captain Cur
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Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

So lovely, Oh so lovely Capt. Cur. Such romantic lines made my heart skip a beat. Nice compelling lines. Enjoyed.

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

this is the poetry which carries the gothic and the mythic touch and comes out of a modern mind, you prevail over centuries, that's why i call you a TIMELESS POET! ! !

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Ken E Hall 15 June 2013

You sure are a captain of the high sees loved this to the depths...reminds me of my first school kid joke which ended Can I leave your Harbour..Never never never...regards

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David Wood 08 June 2013

Ooh arrh cap'n, Aphrodite would blush reading your poem.

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Yasmin Khan 08 June 2013

A tribute to Aphrodite in powerful images.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2013

very good poem, thanks, I enjoyed it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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