Monday, May 8, 2006

Sidewalk Revisited: Treatment Poem Collection Comments

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Tuesday's gone and So is Sarah
I'll burn on even through I can't bare
To look you in the eyes and say I hate you
Life's a lie and I can't date you
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Goldy Locks 08 May 2006

very passionate write. makes me think of Creeley's poem on love: one is torn & the other, somehow immaculate. sus

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