Monday, December 22, 2008

Sideshow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The carnival barker cried, 'Step right up, folks!
The most stupendous show of the midway!
He tries to work and cannot think;
he tries to think and cannot work.
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William Kruse
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Gi Galen 22 December 2008

Witty... ”The most hilarious show in town” Yes, Entertaining the 'initiative' it is necessary to ”Rescue”... Nice...

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Chuck Audette 22 December 2008

Nicely done. It's what I look for in a poem; humor, a surprise ending and a bit of self-reflection. -chuck

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William Kruse

William Kruse

Armour, South Dakota, U.S.A.
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