Life when you breathe
No breathe means death
You are like wood
Now may turn to earth’s food
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Life and death. Robin PatirLess than a minute ago Death is not the end of life.Soul is immortal.It transform from one form to another. Comment +1
nice poem Créatif WordLess than a minute ago I like the way you liken death to wood and our subsequent melt away into the earth; from the earth we were born and to the earth we return...but i didn't understand your last line Comment +1
either to complex or just too random Alex Whipp2 minutes ago i struggled to follow your train of thought and to draw pictures of meaning from your analogies Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago coin has two sides.. life and death... soul is coul
Emilia Ayuk likes this. Emilia Ayuk From dust we came and to dust we shall retturn, this has always keep me wondering at the both sides of the coin of death and life 35 mins · Unlike · 1
This my father said when I asked about death, were you afraid to be born? the poem is the same consideration, so celebrate the day together dear poet your poems always make me think and learn 24 minutes ago by leafsailors Ghost | Reply
Stuti Nayak likes this. Stuti Nayak Amazing..birth-absolute truth thro the life-the beautiful lie low down to death-unavoidable truth.. 7 mins · Unlike · 1
tt Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 6 hrs · Unlike · 1