Sunday, October 6, 2013

Side Effects Of Growing Up Comments

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Whenever I remember those days
automatically a mischievous smile appears on face and eyes becomes wet
Inside me, I am desperately searching the same innocence
But, sorry friends
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Abhishek Mishra
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Vishal Sharma 02 February 2014

great poem friend loved the concept of your verse

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2013

yes, days of childhood will always be good for all of us, the time when we still work ourselves without fear, positive, love and innocent...aging not only wrinkle skin but damaging heart..._Soul

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Lucifera Santez 02 December 2013

nicely written. brings nostalgic memories. well i cant repent that i have grown up. a very good piece. :)

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Lucifera Santez 02 December 2013

nicely written. brings nostalgic memories. well i cant repent that i have grown up. a very good piece. :)

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Neela Nath Das 20 October 2013

It is my desire too.Loved the lines- - - Being child was more enjoying more rewarding but TIME which has elapsed never come now best part of LIFE has gone

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Cassandra Jasmine 15 October 2013

A great composition! ! It's true though. Everyone around me wishes to be young, to change things, once again. However, those who led a more responsible, understanding, less rebellious childhood, enjoy their life, no matter their age. Great write!

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 October 2013

A nice poem on innocence lost.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 October 2013

pro memoria; childhood and mirth is worth to remember but vanity kills, shadowy smile more than the venom that bite thank u God bless you thanks dear 10

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 October 2013

childhood is definitely the best time of life. great write.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

A very nice comparison of the past and the present in life.

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Wahab Abdul 06 October 2013

wonderful poem is it.. love it.. see my poem '' adolescence'' i had written the same thing a year ago....especially the last line....i love it and wish i had written like it again...aw

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