Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Side Affects Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tipped up the glass
and drank you in sideways.
I felt like a doxy
making her pass.
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2014

and you lived happily ever after? Affects or Effects? i don't really know, so i'm asking. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm glad this american looked up doxy: dox·y 'däkse/ noun archaic noun: doxy; plural noun: doxies a lover or mistress. a prostitute. ..............................interesting. i liked the rhyming. thanks for sharing, young lady! bri ;)

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Brian Johnston 07 March 2014

Yeah you were right! I liked it! : -)

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James Timothy Jarrett 17 April 2013

Short and sweet. Succinct.

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Louis Cecile 07 March 2010

This simply draws me to want to know more, but I also feel I know what will happen. Well crafted poem.

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