Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Sickly Cyclone Titli Comments

Rating: 4.8

Meteorological forecasting told us
A sickly cyclone came hitting East Coast,
Sickly greenish wind blew in high speed,
Old whooping was repeated and heard,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Milan Panda 07 June 2020

Cyclone Titli had frightened us a lot and we had taken care of people and us to protect lives. Trees had broken down. Loses were witnessed. We pray God; such cyclone should not come in future.

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Indira Renganathan 04 November 2018

The horrendous nature of a cyclone is picturesque in your words...the scenario during and after cyclone is beautifully described....well done..kudos Kumar...100

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2018

The cyclone named Titli that hit the east coast is beautifully described by you....10

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Akhtar Jawad 18 October 2018

A touching description of a tragedy nicely penned by Mahakul Ji.

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2018

After cyclone sluggish wind smiled, Sulky devastation murmured in high rate, Birds losing their nests cried in agony, Homelessness grew looking towards sky, - - - - - - - - -Your poem has captured vividly the fear and disaster of cyclone 'Titli' that hit Odisha on 11th October,2018. I wonder sometime how we select such a soft name 'Titli' meaning 'Butterfly' for a dreadsome cyclone !

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Elena Sandu 17 October 2018

Thank you for sharing, sigh, a painful read. This poem may have described so well some of the disasters we had a month earlier from a taifun, followed by many earthquakes. Sadly, disasters develop and grow all over the world. I think our earth is angry and is trying to tellus something. Please keep safe.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2018

Cyclone! ! ! With the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 October 2018

This is a descriptive poem on the natural calamity. It will not come back - it is gone!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2018

Has come Titli taken away deadly disordered nature frightened entire. Titli, even so little bird As Ababil attacked hard Oh! We couldn't guard! /// nicely penned

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T Rajan Evol 17 October 2018

Nature takes revenge in its own ways, our greed is our cause of destruction.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2018

After cyclone sluggish wind smiled, Sulky devastation murmured in high rate, Birds losing their nests cried in agony......I can imagine the terrible situation aftermath the cyclone! Brilliantly penned....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 October 2018

Kumarmani, such a well penned poem......................

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2018

A vivid portrayal of a violent tropical storm. It depicted how a strong wind and heavy rains could bring disaster to a particular place. A disaster that could crumble every man's dreams. Well crafted write. Very informative.10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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