Friday, December 14, 2012

Sick Written Comments

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Sickly I am and sick I delay
For today is nothing but
A vey big mistake
A senseless day I tremor
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April Swan
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 15 December 2012

a little ache.. well expressed.. nice imagery

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Poetheart Morgan 14 December 2012

Not a sick written just a little ache! ! ! I see more in that poem! Well done! Like it.

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April Swan

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