Sick World Comments

scars seem so deep that the pain has flown down in thos words of gloom sympathetic laurals

oh it much painful....so much depressing....all the depression are visible i the words which is makes the poem so much live and heart breaking..... don't worry world is cruel although we have to survive ans life is much more struggling and we are alive becouze we can not give up.....ok..take care and keep writing

yeah you are right. i totally agree wih you as i also now going through these situations you describe its a superb poem keep rocking like this thanks 10+++