Sick Love Comments

This poem has a smooth flow. The iagery is quite clear. I enjoyed the read. Bien!

Well done. you have don a wonderful job expressing you feeling.

a well written poem about a lovely relationship.........

good poem nicely penned! ! ! !

A lovely poem and tenderly written, very well done. Best wishes, Andrew

i really like this it flows great.and lots of emotion

that was very beautiful right away it made me think of my boyfriend i love so much: i love the moon and night so it was a perfect brand with ones notions and emotions of a person

Great poem nice Wards keep on good writing 10+++

It is more like a narrative poem. Great composition though.

wonderful write with some cool rhymes

I see much through the hair on this neck..it is a fair thigh unknown by brand to sight..she it sees is grace on one bent knee..to touch a flame..iip

this is an amazing poem..i can actually feel all of these feelings. i really like this.