Monday, September 2, 2019

Sick From The Starbucks Girl Comments

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I hope I don't become sick
From the Starbucks girl
She had a fever- -coughing, sneezing
And a burning in her chest
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Practicing Poetess
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Ray Hansell 12 September 2019

Great write. You hit it. We see this too often.

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Louis Rams 10 September 2019

maybe she needed money to buy her meds, rather than someone finding her dead

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Practicing Poetess 10 September 2019

Gosh Louis, I don't think she was THAT sick! (Or, I hope not, anyway!) : -)

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Prabir Gayen 04 September 2019

I touched I'm worried, I confess! The more I think about it, Feels like I'm gonna hurl! Guess I'll go home and get some rest, So should the Starbucks girl..sweet

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Practicing Poetess 04 September 2019

Thank you, Prabir. Hopefully, she DID go home and rest up. I know I did! : -)

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Mj Lemon 02 September 2019

Great verse, Poetess. A copy of this should be posted under every 'employee of the month' photo.

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Practicing Poetess 03 September 2019

Heehee Mj; LOVE it! : -) The moral of this poem is: Don't come to work if you're ill. You could pass it on to your customers! (And yes, I am sniffling a little now, and sneezing.) Ah-choo!

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Douglas Scotney 02 September 2019

getting that poem down must make it a good luck charm

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Practicing Poetess 02 September 2019

Haha, Douglas! Thank you for your comment! : -)

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