Thursday, January 2, 2014
Sick But Okay Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I'm tired of sickness,
Seven months of being ill,
Pain is more not less,
I don't know, it's God's will.
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Abdallah Gamal
02 January 2014
Outstanding! Your use of rhythm in your poem is magnificent.. Also the words have put a spell of sad on the whole poem which came to deliver your entire emotions to the reader's mind.. Really beautiful.. Go on and keep up the good work.. Rated +10
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7/19/2025 3:03:51 PM # 1.0.0
Perfect! ! ? so touching so early and hard to get these feelings on your young age