Thursday, June 25, 2009

$$$siblings Whom Steal$$$ Comments

Rating: 2.7

Ever had a bro?
What about a sis?
Danger Will Robinson Danger, I have 3
They spend their days consumed with guilt
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is it poetry NO its not
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Adeline Foster 26 September 2009

Well, it would be pietry if it were not for all the redundant symbols and the spelling mistakes. I would not point this out were it not that every poem I have read of yours is replete with these errors. It makes for difficult reading and cuts the enjoyment of the poem. This is not necessary because you need only take it into WORD and the spellchecker will show you the correct spelling. Adeline

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