Friday, January 18, 2008

Siblings Comments

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Siblings come in all shapes and sizes
There are many subjects you should think
When the golden sun rises
When they play tricks on you
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Discreet Poetic
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Siblings, a blessing and well, siblings are people. I love that you put yourself into another's sight and then write from that point of view, the view of someone with siblings. Good write!

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Decreetly Poetic 18 January 2008

I should let you people know that i dont have any sublings that is why i wrote this poem so to all those people who have syblings please feel lucky that you have someone.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 18 January 2008

nice work nice sentament keep it up

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