Wednesday, December 19, 2018

Shyness, Not A Puzzle.... Comments

Rating: 3.8

Shyness, not a puzzle

i am not an apple
but i turn red at most times
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sachidananda Panda 16 July 2020

shyness can't be a balancing act... it's rather cloaked turmoil within or gross incompetence to handle the task.... or cope with the situation around.[ I think] Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 December 2018

This is not a puzzle. A sign of shyness and shyness itself this is. An interesting presentation style motivates mind of many readers. The way you have described redness of apple as metaphor and humor is excellent. When a person climbs the mountain his face becomes red. You describe this as redness of apple so gently and indicate that a greater hope of success is hidden behind. Shyness is very friendly here to bring closeness with God. An excellent poem is nicely penned....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 December 2018

very lovely apple is red and pink and green and so many hues see from GOD'S VIEWS PL KINDLY READ MY POEM MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DY TODAY surly u will like em I say if GOD WILLS IT YOU MAY THNX I SAY

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 December 2018

Please READ FIRST, then ask me again to give comment on both of your poems, TPP. You have asked me once. I had done that. Sure, please, read that. Thank you so much for your attentive response on my poem. God's Blessings for you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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