Thursday, April 14, 2016

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sitting on cedar knees
my feet touching water
am trying to write yours
ripples keep on erasing
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Manonton Dalan
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Ena N. Mori 15 April 2016

We can always expect beautiful poetry from you. Thank you for being there for me when I recently lost both of my parents. You have been such a great supportive friend.

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Manonton Dalan 15 April 2016

wo yao zhege..xiexie

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2016

flapping wings echoes over valley of promising shelter gliding to peaceful flow....oh what a beautiful description.....the words you use, the expressions.. they are marvelous. a marvelous dream.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Manonton Dalan 14 April 2016

danke sir

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