Thursday, July 23, 2009

' ' ' ' Shy Moon And Sake Cup(Tanka) Comments

Rating: ★2.8

Drunk on nothing but
you...I sip...from sake cup
lips to lips I kiss
such bliss...hard to imagine.
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Dónall Dempsey
moon Lips imagine kiss
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Onelia Avelar 07 August 2009

Almost eastern eroticism - hidden very deep in lotuses and cups :) and the shy moon above all of course - it is all very Eastern, it is not easy for an Irish to be almost a Japanese :) . A bounteous nature put in the small measured frame of the tanka, well done :)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
Dónall Dempsey
Dónall Dempsey
Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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