'Shy' Guy Comments

Good poem. It's direct, quirky, and fluid. It isn't forced at all, it flows... like a poem should. The sincerity of the emotions, and the honest innocence of the poet make it truely worth reading. Keep it up, this is a good piece.

Excellent! The word arrangement and choice wove a lovely story in the lines and flowed in unity to the closing, effective line. Creative concept, refreshing texture, and totally wonderful all the way.10++++