Wednesday, December 17, 2008

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The words I speak
Rarely ever the ones I want to say
Living in my mind day to day
Afraid to speak cause im weak
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Dereck Gibbs
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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2008

A very nice piece of work from you.Thanks for sharing it with us to learn from you as well.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Gloria Wekesa 17 December 2008

love your poem Dereck and the command and use of language is superb

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