Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Shut Up! Comments

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Moon, moon that follows tune. Shadow fortress
telling the planet to shhhh, quiet! My web is spun.
My work is done. The dark surrounds you, and it
surrounds me. Black pool named Night thieving the
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Julia Luber
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Paul Brookes 11 September 2019

A beautiful poem on the lunar times enjoyed thanks

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James Mclain 10 September 2019

We poet's are very sensitive, Sometimes we think it's all about us until the end Is reached. Great poem Julia.

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Julia Luber 10 September 2019

Thank you for reading and not assuming a certain negativity with those harsh words Shut Up. I meant it to be a wee bit comical?

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Panagiota Romios 10 September 2019

Good poem from one entranced by the heavens. My mind never shuts up. Nature relaxes. Me? No))

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Julia Luber 10 September 2019

Nicely interpreted- shedding light on a poem about the moon. Thank you for reading and responding!

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