Friday, July 22, 2011

Shut Off The Mind Comments

Rating: 0.0

If we could see our outer selves,
Through the eyes of the young and their innocent wealth.

Remove the knowledge and the gathered years,
...
Read full text

Daniel P Martin
COMMENTS
Sharron Stephenson 02 September 2011

true words form the heart and soul

0 0 Reply
Jim Troy 01 September 2011

Daniel I really like this one.... Does it ever have the rhythm and rhyme....Good work.... quite an active mind with imagination still in good stead. Need more of that in this old world. You certainly are an original.. I enjoy your art.... Thanks for the invite...................Jim Troy

0 0 Reply
Daniel P Martin

Daniel P Martin

Plymouth
Close
Error Success