Shut her
Life is no joke
No one can stake
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Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing no one has control over it.. the perception carries depth.. your poem is very informative with a precise urge to the human society in general.. I liked your penultimate stanza most..a wonderful piece of work ..10
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The proposal has to match with seriousness Else there will be no sense The parents may think of not allowing her To mingle with and shut her for moving further
Nice! Keep writing and responding to other posts. Jasneet Kaur, Nov 06,2017