Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, November 4, 2017

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Shut her

Life is no joke
No one can stake
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2017

Nice! Keep writing and responding to other posts. Jasneet Kaur, Nov 06,2017

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2017

Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing no one has control over it.. the perception carries depth.. your poem is very informative with a precise urge to the human society in general.. I liked your penultimate stanza most..a wonderful piece of work ..10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

Abhishek Kumar Shandilya Thank you so much Sir Hasmukh Mehta that you appreciated me the way. Like · Reply · 1 · 8 minutes ago Remove

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

welcome ashok kimar shandilya Like · Reply · 1 · A few seconds ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

The proposal has to match with seriousness Else there will be no sense The parents may think of not allowing her To mingle with and shut her for moving further

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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