Friday, August 16, 2013

Shunyata- -Completeness In Nothingness Comments

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Hush hush voices
murmuring noises
A hall full of audience
filled with air of expectation
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Om Chawla
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Kavya . 29 August 2013

a very nice thought provoking poem....enjoyed reading

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Patricia Grantham 28 August 2013

I enjoyed your poem. I had never read a poem like this one in that it takes you a place of total relaxation then leaves with sweet and melodious sounds reverberating in the air. A sweet way to meditate. Thanks for explaining the terms. Helped a lot.

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Valsa George 28 August 2013

The rising crescendo of this melody reverberates in stillness! What an experience... What sublime evolution of thought! ! I am now so blissfully lost in Shunyata.... A fantastic experience reading this! Ofcourse a great tribute to your brother! 10 on 10

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Dinesan Madathil 27 August 2013

By and far your write has a completeness of its own sir. The gradual elevation of the argumentative seed has sprouted well towards the end and the poem has got finish. Take care of your physical health sir to keep on posting. All the best Chawla sir.

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