Hush hush voices
murmuring noises
A hall full of audience
filled with air of expectation
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I enjoyed your poem. I had never read a poem like this one in that it takes you a place of total relaxation then leaves with sweet and melodious sounds reverberating in the air. A sweet way to meditate. Thanks for explaining the terms. Helped a lot.
The rising crescendo of this melody reverberates in stillness! What an experience... What sublime evolution of thought! ! I am now so blissfully lost in Shunyata.... A fantastic experience reading this! Ofcourse a great tribute to your brother! 10 on 10
By and far your write has a completeness of its own sir. The gradual elevation of the argumentative seed has sprouted well towards the end and the poem has got finish. Take care of your physical health sir to keep on posting. All the best Chawla sir.
a very nice thought provoking poem....enjoyed reading