Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Shuffling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shuffling is reshuffling of life
like to cheat his own soul
when soul demur to shuffle
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ramesh rai
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Hazel Durham 30 October 2014

Our soul stays the same no matter how many changes we make in our life, we cannot run away from the truth of our souls! Powerful write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2014

Soul objects to shuffling but forced to take new forms. That is what life is. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Salini Nair 26 October 2014

soul demur to shuffle...short but great...

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful poem with great meaning. Some times we keeps on reshuffling till we are satisfied....Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 October 2014

Shuffling and reshuffling both have deep meanings. Ramesh Rai has kept it open for the readers to have their own meanings. The poem needed a poet's note. I like it according to my understanding. I take it as shuffling of human relationships that is in fact a reshuffling by which we cheat our souls, whereas soul is pure and it resists this reshuffling.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 October 2014

Sweet and succinct......truly composed very beautifully....

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