Shuffling Somehow Is Sad Comments

Pain! ! ! ! Dragging one's feet. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The kind and empathetic heart of the speaker in this poem is soothing, and gently guides the reader into awareness.

I really like this poem- -you picked an original topic and not only that, you gave in-depth attention to it. You didn't go for oh, how sad and leave it at that. You gave it technicolor: Life needs support not shuffling. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -And you install huge wisdom: Obeying God's wisdom is good, Beauty is found in cooperation. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Well thought out and well written. Excellent!

Life needs support not shuffling...very realistic things are depicted in this poem..really in many cases it is found that human beings behave like crabs pulling each other's legs- an excellent poem is shared..10

Having no cooperation and pulling others leg is really bad behavior... First ought to learn to stand properly.. Well written Kumar