Monday, November 22, 2010

Shuffle On The Blue Line Comments

Rating: 4.8

Heading for work, to the city, caught the early bird from platform four
No seat left abandon, only choice is standing, next to the old man by the exit door
He tells me his story, fast forward on the journey
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Colin Coplin
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Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

Stole a glimpse out of the window At the young lady in the Mona Lisa style The wind started blowing, her hair started flowing Before I knew it she was in my isle beautiful lines of the poem. A soothing read.

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