Saturday, February 11, 2023

Shrooms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Psilocybin silly when the
cops arrive.
Sitting on the couch naked,
laughter aching jaws.
...
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Thomas Case
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Bri Edwards 12 February 2023

5 stars, ...for humor, brevity, and the (sometimes) killer ending. : )

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Bri Edwards 12 February 2023

I wonder if this is the poet's recounting of a true experience, his or someone else's. My wife cooks with mushrooms, but they aren't the 'magic' kind.

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Bri Edwards 12 February 2023

This poem begs for a Poet's Notes. But actually, after rereading this, I've found it, yes, funny in a way, and eyeopening. But how did cops happen to arrive? Not by invitation I suppose. : )

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 February 2023

Sitting on the couch naked.......I can't say mushrooms are all bad.... Ha Ha Ha Ha...nice humorous

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Thomas Case

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