Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

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Friday, December 5, 2025

Shrinking Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I'm becoming less, as you can see.
Just what am I supposed to be?
I keep losing syllables.
If I don't stop shrinking
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Kim Barney

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Kim Barney 07 December 2025

Thank you to all who have commented on this poem. Your comments are not showing up yet, so I can't respond to them individually.

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Belle Wassermeister 05 December 2025

Wow! That is a marvelous nonet! I can see why it took first place in the contest. It truly deserved to do so. Another great accomplishment for you.

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Kim Barney 10 December 2025

Thank you so much, my Belle. You're a good friend as well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2025

Amazing poem so appropriate for the poetic style. Brilliantly crafted, Kim!

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Kim Barney 10 December 2025

Thank you, Rose Marie. You're pretty as can be.

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Cantrell Bill 05 December 2025

Very cool poem, at first I thought it referenced getting older or either Alzheimer's, I never heard of this type of poem but I think it's cool, thanks Kim

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Kim Barney 10 December 2025

I want to thank you, Bill. We're both over the hill.

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Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

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