*shrine Comments

A very interesting write, good flow and content, 10 Lynda xx

s really a tough one.... nice............. this poems tells something.. i cant understand it... but i felt it tells something

The intruders have struck again. This time to demoralize us by desecrating the shrine of Rahman Baba (r.a) May God bless his kind soul. But they don't know it'll have a reverse effect Thanks for uniting us, terrorists I salute you for writing this one Mr. Khan Wish i could give it a 1000+++++++_+++

Sadiqullah, Remarkable forgotten to news carries yours poems.... Beauty in a mystery...10.. Best wishes, Tsira

Sadiquillah, I won't pretend to know who Rehman Baba is but your words compel me to find out. Fine tribute from a lofted pen.

A finely penned tribute my friend, well delivered 10

A great tribute penned to a great person.......its really worthy......sadiq bhai u realized us what our real wealth is.........Great! ! !

Dear Sadiq I came to know about the unfortunate incidence, this is the worst of all cases, But they could only crumble the stone and sand edifice...but the great man's legacy lives on in the souls of people like you and many more....dare they touch it! ! ! ! ! ! Long live the POET! ! ! ! !

Tha last three lines of this poem are really superb.10.for your rich use of imagery. Warm regards, Sandra

'The lock of my chain is like the flame of candle Like a tongue it speaks like a pen it writes My blood is the ink my heart is the page' ahaaaaaaaaaa such lovely wordssssssss so divine its like drinking the heavenly winesssssss ---10 anjali