Sunday, May 28, 2023

Shrewd Will Outsmart The Brave- A Hunter And A Fox. Comments

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In the meadow the huntsman waits,
his firearm aimed, he anticipates,
the duck quacks, an easy prey,
and the huntsman shoots without delay,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2023

A most important moral taught in the form of a wonderfully creative poem. Love it, Asim!

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Poetic Sky 29 May 2023

Profound poem, in the wild there's no true possession, Perfect.

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That is the law of the jungle. True, dear poet

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2023

A wonderful narration, Nicely written.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 May 2023

enjoyed this long poem very much brasvo!

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Anjandev Roy 28 May 2023

Excellent work.....my friend.....with a great message....

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David Wood 28 May 2023

Lovely story Asim, we have idiot huntsmen in Britain too.

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M. Asim Nehal

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