Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Shrewd Chivalry Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wasn’t me
And you weren’t you
Pretending to be
Through this fog, what’s really true
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Jack Dylan
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Sydney Daniels 27 May 2006

You evoke such emotion from me, not only by the words you use but the way you use the ones you don't. I, too, can read between the lines.

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Will Barber 25 May 2006

A fine poem, consistent imagery. Pretty shrewd, too!

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Patricia Gale 23 May 2006

An enjoyable read. Well done the words flowed. And of course the mention of the knight to go with the title, Grand! Patricia Gale

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David Gerardino 23 May 2006

warmed with guilt, great line

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