Saturday, November 14, 2009

Showing Off Big Time Comments

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Baby when God made you He was showing off big big time
You are stunningly beautiful and baby you`re mine
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Henry Brown
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Luwi Habte 24 November 2009

ah, what an adorable father also father-in-law you are please? ? so very well penned poem not only a poem also a rhyme, and a wonderful song well done there luwi

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Obinna Eruchie 23 November 2009

I can tell you are truly a song writer, I was singing along when reading this. Keep it up, you are doing too well.

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Alf Hutchison 23 November 2009

Henry this is great...I am not musical at all but do enjoy music especially the golden oldies when you could understand the words... put it to music my friend... well done... warm regards Alf

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Johannesburg South Africa
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