Wednesday, January 28, 2009

*** Showers Of Love *** Comments

Rating: 4.0

Stared at you
with innocence of doe
the oceanic
serenity of eyes
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ANJALI SINHA
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

interesting...very inspiring..

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

feels like words from an angel anjali..sooo very beautiful...I enjoyed it very much...you know it's no wonder you have lots of fans..cause your words can capture many hearts... hope you are smiling now..thanks anju A++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Cool lovely love as the title.

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Allemagne Roßmann 13 April 2009

Come now Hearken! to my heartbeats for there shall neither be a separation nor a waiting on death row Sequel- 'Come on hold my hands Don't leave me in all this pain of love Don't laugh at me in the rain of love Come back and bring back my smile Come kiss my fears away I need your arms to hold me now The nights are so unkind Bring back those nights when I wished wished to hold you beside me And i lip-synch- Un-break my heart Say you'll love me again Undo this hurt you caused When you walked out the door And walked outta my life Un-cry these tears I cried so many nights Un-break my heart My heart Take back that sad word good-bye Bring back the joy to my life Don't leave me here with these tears Come and kiss this pain away I can't forget the day you left Time is so unkind And life is so cruel without you here beside me Don't leave me in all this pain Don't leave me out in the rain Bring back the nights when I held you beside me Un-break my heart Come back and say you love me Un-break my heart Sweet darlin' Without you I just can't go on Can't go on Nice and Nagging........++++++++10

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Mahfooz Ali 01 April 2009

You are the true my distant fren..........

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Mahfooz Ali 01 April 2009

Of! ho! plz bund karo na yeh shower..... main bheeg jaunga............ Achcha..... after so much traumas in my life............ u filled the colors.........

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Ruerd Visser 26 March 2009

I'm delighted that you found me its such a joy to discover the work of fellow poets who pour out their hearts and souls. Keep watching with those oceanic eyes and reavel your vision to the world! Dreamsgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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~ Jon London ~ 10 March 2009

All that surrounds, love fills the earth let it's beauty fall around...stunning 10+++ You're an excellent poetess, your ability to creat such fine writes with you soft and gentle flow, is to be admired....and I do admire you. Keep expressing Jon London

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Eyan Desir 09 February 2009

nice poem, good follow

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Ridge Cahill 08 February 2009

O’ what a beautiful bouquet you splay before us - My sunlight of knowledge And my moonlight of love Transformed the mud of Ignorance and opened the petals of your lotus mind A poem wrought of much emotion – desire, doubt and certainty. The last two lines are simply magnificent. Only to be showered so. Bravo!

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Seema Aarella 07 February 2009

Numerous enjoyable lines...last ones very best! ! ! You are soaring high on the poetic skies......all the best Anju!

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 02 February 2009

this is a very good poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

Your showers of love are the showers of life! ! ! ! ! Enchanting!

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Ajith Patnaik 02 February 2009

so.........deep! ! ! ! am horrified wit ur maturity

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anurag duggal 02 February 2009

Are u a piscean....u seem i think to live completely on LOVE.......a prerequisite for such passionate poetry

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C. P. Sharma 01 February 2009

the grandeur of your love poetry is soul capturing. CP

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Aijaz Asif 30 January 2009

Stared at you with innocence of doe the oceanic serenity of eyes reveal the depth. Look deep in me Mistake not those glances the fiery glow of a lioness’ roar........ufffffffffffff my all bravos are for your write dear, another master piece, an extremely beautiful write and it make me feel like im reading my own thoughts, please accept my bow for writting and sharing another master piece withn me... rgds asif.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 January 2009

Hearken! to my heartbeats, and verily he did so... Andy 10

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 29 January 2009

what a passionate poem.... The lover is expecting his love in slow motions and temporary departure is so painful to her... this thoughts really fascinate the reader. Nice work Anjali

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 29 January 2009

you have described the shower of love and i feel the rain of love as its so natural to feel..........really sweet poem this is and every dropp is the dropp of love with ots of words sayng...and lots of trust spreading.......lovely poem......

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