Monday, March 27, 2006

Shower Comments

Rating: 3.8

There was only a note
on the living room door,
and in lipgloss she wrote
'I can't take it no more.'
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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Mary Nagy 28 March 2006

A very funny poem Herbert. :) Sincerely, Mary

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Ernestine Northover 27 March 2006

Very, very good Herbert, and it was nice to have some humour in it too, it made me smile. Thanks, I needed that. Love Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 27 March 2006

As we say here in the South, Legally blind, my hind foot! Feeling your way in place of eyesight, Uhhuh! ! and as the kids say nowadays, Yeah, Right. Ha, very funny poem. Scarlett

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Raynette Eitel 27 March 2006

Mmmm, Herbert...what a fun poem. Raynette

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Esther Leclerc 27 March 2006

Light and winking, this! 'Legally blind'... I bet! ! ! Thanks for the laugh. Esther : ]

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 March 2006

Now that's what I call seriously happy dreaming! ! LOL. Thanks for the smile, Herbs. G.

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