Thursday, May 18, 2017

Shower Comments

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When I shower
I stand right beneath the water
So I don't hear anything
except the water screaming in my ears
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Ann McKinley
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Thomas Plotz 10 June 2017

I always wondered if it counts as crying if it's done in the shower, or the rain; or anywhere that water also exist? Does it count if others don't see. I'm sure I'm heard, by someone. And the tears blend in with the water so its like I am not crying at all Much like in life When we scream out as we fall Great poem Taylor - thank you. Good to read your work again.

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