Saturday, May 10, 2014

Shower Comments

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My grief is dirt of the darkest filth,
My sadness is blood from my heart that's spilt.
My anger is sunburn,
Painful to the touch.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 29 May 2014

I already wrote comments on this poem but had to put them in MESSAGE TO POET section because the codes weren't working at the time. Just now when I clicked on the title SHOWER I had forgotten the reference and assumed it meant a rain shower, in other words I thought I was going to read a Nature poem! How different this poem is from one describing the everyday events of Mother Nature. In this poem you confront one of humanity's worst events, one that as the film shows still haunts us with its nightmare reality. Your poem is bold, stark, necessary. For all the innocents who were cruelly murdered by war, your poem remembers them, and that is like giving them a share of the life that was taken from them.

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

Roseburg, Oregon
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