Thursday, September 4, 2008

Show Time...! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clock struck six thirty
The remote ran towards me
It was time for my favorite show
Which had started a year ago
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sania harris
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Kee Thampi 15 September 2008

this poet is really talented to write for us, worth to read, she seized the World of poetry Without hearing any of my plea I screamed out very loud And made myself a crowd At last victory was mine And everything went fine

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Tia Maria 13 September 2008

Thank you for your note & yes I can see we are just a day apart after reading this :) Good one! ... hehe, two peas in a pod

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 12 September 2008

Hello Sania, So happy that you gave yourself time to write a poem where there is laughter...Give a smile away today the return will be wonderful. Dorothy

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2008

An excellent light piece. Keep writing Sania.

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Tom Balch 06 September 2008

You are going to be a great writer young lady, love this piece 10+ regards Tom

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Stephen Peter Mills 05 September 2008

Wow! this poem reminds me a bit of Spike Milligan's work, a fantastic ending to a clever poem.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

well expressed.......fine!

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