Monday, August 8, 2016

Show Me Where To Steal! Comments

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Show me where to steal,
Coz I am tired of being honest
In a society where values are only learnt in class
Yet practiced none on the grass.
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Rose Kanana 09 August 2016

i like the sarcasm in the Poem 'Show me where to steal' good utilization of the stylistic devise to bring out the rot in the society

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Dedan Onyango 10 August 2016

Thank you Poetess Kanana. Help me speak out on this vice. Will you?

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 08 August 2016

Wow. I enjoyed while reading. I did laugh sometimes, but so sad sometimes. Below I quoted my favourate lines. thank you for sharing I don't want a colony of thieves around me to bother! Show me where to steal, I, your Grandpa am tired too Of sitting down waiting for godot Yet my age mates are eating in kempinski Yet my grandson, is now a grand stealer, Let's all take part A reverse in time won't help neither.

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Dedan Onyango 09 August 2016

Thank you so much for your comment! Corruption is alive and well in my country and the people who are set to eradicate it are the ones unfortunately fueling it. I hope with my meager efforts i will be able to sensitize the public who seem to have given up on this vice! Thank you!

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