Monday, July 15, 2013

Show Me The Path Comments

Rating: 5.0

I ran as fast as I could
To reach You
And You're hiding from me
Impossible to be found.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2023

I wish to live a spotless life More precious than all the wealth......Loved this simple and humble expression! Upright, simple and virtuous....Top score!

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Bree Z Love 15 January 2018

Great poem! The desiring to be filled and whole is such an universal essential need. I felt the surge through the run!

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Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart!

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Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart!

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Ramesh Rai 22 July 2013

I wish to live a spotless life More precious than all the wealth I bow to You and surrender I'm Yours, all Yours now.

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Yasmin Khan 18 July 2013

It's a supplication, a mystical write. inner goodness speaks loud and clear.

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R.j. Wynn 18 July 2013

A great conversation emulating prayer. Very pretty.

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Somanathan Iyer 18 July 2013

This is an excellent write. hard to lead a spotless life. but the determination will take towards that. very enjoyable and thoughtful.

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R.benjamin Abate 17 July 2013

Very submissive and reassuring. Thank You.

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A very sincere supplication to God. I love it

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Shahzia Batool 16 July 2013

Enough findings if one comes up with this in hands: I wish to live a spotless life More precious than all the wealth

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David Wood 16 July 2013

This is a lovely poem and prayer. We all need to know the right path to follow.

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Valsa George 15 July 2013

A very beautiful prayer! For a person who regards a spotless life as worthier than all other riches, the right path will definitely be shown! A great poem!

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

excellent thoughts in this poem. show me the way to a spotless life. lovely

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Gajanan Mishra 15 July 2013

I wish to live a spotless life, very good. I am yours, all yours now. My heart my soul.10

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