Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Show Me Comments

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Show me laughter
Then teach me how.
And compose a symphony
On the strength of one smile.
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Robert Siney
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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2008

You express your angst with a poet's eye and use the repetition om the 'Show me' lines as a pleasing frame to hold your thoughts. 'Compose a symphony On the strength of one smile.' is a particularly beautiful image. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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