Sunday, August 17, 2008

Shouting In Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am prisoner in a dim
If my heart beats, the ribs will kill him
I am near the crater rim
Everyone antagonize me because I'm Muslim
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Shahad Raad
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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Shahad, I hope one day someone does listen, I hope one day someone understands, I hope one day someone realises we are all human beings, who have families and friends, who work to live. Our differences and belief's all cry for understanding, to hate because of this surely bears no love of human beings. Keep shouting to the silence, one day someone will understand. Warm regards Bob

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Melissa Thompson 15 May 2009

A very strong and meaningful..10/10

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Ravi Sathasivam 19 August 2008

A poem from bottom of your heart. It has a meaningful thoughts. Well said. Ravi. (Pls read my poems 'they are refugees in their own country' and 'When will we see our peaceful world again?)

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bashar th 17 August 2008

Poem meaningful and broad imagination. 'Thin and at the same time presented the reality of Timorese to Western countries. We hope more wonderful

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Shalini Kts 17 August 2008

very nice poem...god bless u

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Estrella Baldemosa 17 August 2008

we have all the rights to equally co-exist. I abhor aggression...violence begets violence. well written

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 August 2008

i'm extremely amazed with this' shine on the truth' facts which often overlooked.yeahh you were right in some of the history.great piece from you shahad.

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